Comic 259 - The Ritual - Epilogue

17th Feb 2012, 10:19 PM
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17th Feb 2012, 10:19 PM
I hope you all enjoyed the story as much as I enjoyed making it. Let me know in the comments any thoughts you have about improving it, as I'm considering expanding it into a 30-something page comic book to sell.


20th Feb 2012, 9:16 AM
No one of consequence
It started interesting and I was curious where The Ritual would end - but you lost me somewhere along the way...
I like the art and it feels like you had a point to make – but if so I missed it.
20th Feb 2012, 4:08 PM
I can definitely see that being the case. I think there's at least 10 or so pages that SHOULD have been put into it to clarify what was going on. A large problem is that I was trying to find a balance between explaining what was going on and showing it, and I managed to not do too well at either one.

I'm going to try to tighten up the story and insert new pages into the archive over the next few weeks / months. I definitely feel like my previous stories were me trying to find my visual style, this one was my attempt to find a storytelling style. It's definitely not perfect, in fact, at times it's an incoherent mess; but I think I'm moving towards improvement.
23rd Feb 2012, 2:28 AM
No one of consequence
That would be cool - seems like there is an interesting idea thet could grow into a story.