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Comic 322 - Guardian Angel - Page 26

21st Jul 2012, 2:48 AM
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21st Jul 2012, 2:48 AM
J2383
Sorry it was so late. I'm not pleased with this page; it was a big idea with a poor execution.

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21st Jul 2012, 6:20 PM
Jef.
I think it works well.
24th Jul 2012, 1:17 AM
No one of consequence
LOL

"Yessir! Whatever you say Mr. Angel of Death sir."
With friends like that, who needs enemies?

Story / thematically it works well, but perhaps it could be more threatening or sinister...maybe different pose?
Not saying it is bad, but it seems a major plot change to "frienemy" offers oppertunity for something more visually dramatic that should be exploited...

This arc is still your best one yet, keep it comming please :-)
24th Jul 2012, 1:30 AM
No one of consequence
Just re-read the arc. At the risk of offering unsolicited advice (fell free to tell me to mind my own business); if you could somehow capture the emotions visibly like you did in awesome p23, and perhaps increase the menace factor by using the reddish hands of p19, I think you will have nailed it.